Panel style + clearer sketch and tone

-I decided to make the flying part one panel instead of the 2/3 it was, since they were essentially the same thing. A big panel is also good for the halfway point.

Reference

Took a video of myself and then screencapped it for people-references. Some aren't at the right angles but it's the pose, at least.

stand still stay silent - artist model

panel style

trying out a fully white background + making it more interesting shapes forming the panels. I think I like this better? for most of it, anyway.